I don't want worthless apologies
Or words that are false
At this point I don't know
If I want to regain what I've lost
If it meant so much, and was as true as said
Then why, tell me, is it now dead...
please accept Gotharg's note of encouragement:
Gotharg thinks you are very sad
Gotharg wonders if this is because you have not yet tapped into your creative potential
please write about something pleasant
please don't dwell on cynical unpleasantries
when you do that it only makes you even sadder
Gotharg wants to read optimistic stuff or at least something darkly humorous (if you must be negative make it funny)
tell Gotharg something uplifting
or make Gotharg laugh
or make Gotharg cry
saying "wah wah wah" or "boo hoo hoo" only makes Gotharg apathetic
you want Gotharg to care about what you have to say, right?
sure you do
so, give Gotharg a reason to care.
tell Gotharg why Gotharg should care.
because after having read your entries,Gotharg doesn't care about what you are saying, and that's makes Gotharg sad
you've got valuable stuff to say to Gotharg, right?
sure, Gotharg knows this. please try to say it where Gotharg will understand. make Gotharg care
right now Gotharg thinks it just looks like a bunch of "oh how my life is bleak! woe is me!"
like Gotharg said, at least make it funny
be creative
Gotharg is sure you have talent
let's see it
be creative
have fun
your audience will love you for it
so willl Gotharg
Posted by: Gotharg at March 27, 2004 12:39 PMya, who are you again?
"It is better to write for yourself and have no public, than to write for the public and have no self..."
Hey Gotharg, piss off.
Your kind is pathetic.
You're an elitist prick.
A narcissistic cockbite, if you will.
Is it your name on the blog?
I think not.
What is a blog?
Kinda like a journal, but publicized online, right?
Right.
Does anyone dictate what you write in your journal?
No.
So don't even go so far as to tell people (or even suggest) what to write in their journal.
Especially if you can't even reveal who you are.
Now mind your own, and everyone will mind theirs.
Oh yeah, and your prose sucks.
Posted by: Gotharg is full of it at March 28, 2004 01:39 AMGotharg is Gotharg. No other.
gotharg sees you quote Cyril Connelly
Gotharg gives you Edwin Schlossberg quote: "The skill of writing is to create a context in which other people can think."
saying "wah wah wah" or "boo hoo hoo" or "narcissistic cockbite" not accomplish this
Gotharg go take a nap now. Gortharg bored with you.
Posted by: gotharg at March 29, 2004 11:20 AMhey Gotharg... Fuck you...
Posted by: Leah at March 29, 2004 08:29 PMGotharg, get off it. She does not write for you or anyone else. She writes for herself. Do not critique it because it's not up for critiquing. You can't express yourself when you have to express things how someone else wants you to express them. Do you understand this? If so, stop trying to tell people how to or how not to express themselves.
For the record, I have no idea who Cyril Connelly is.
/me waits for retort from Gotharg about how stupid I may be for not knowing. This will make a point that Gotharg cannot leave well enough alone. If all things must be as Gotharg sees them, I wish blindness upon Gotharg.
Posted by: Gotharg is also dense at March 30, 2004 12:04 AMGotharg is blind. Gotharg navigate internet using only sounds coming from computer. you not stupid. gotharg also has no idea who cyril connelly is.
PS -- "wah wah wah, boo hoo hoo"