I got a letter from a parent today that used the most lovely rhetoric! I seriously am going to keep it as an example of wonderful writing for when I teach college, or upper high school. I mean, this thing uses correct grammar and punctuation, it flows from one paragraph to the next, it has one overarching thesis with each paragraph clearly explaining each aspect of the thesis, and it makes the point while being polite and firm.
It uses phrases like "I trust my daughter will not suffer any negative consequences as a result of this letter" and "I am sure that this matter will be dealt with immediately."
It's practically a work of art. Well, maybe more like a nice, strong house that is practical and to the point and well-put-together. It was just really nicely written.
But it hurt my pride, it bruised my self-image, and sprained my ego. That happens.
But to have it happen so nicely...it's like being beaten up by a butler.
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