April 07, 2004

The Orchard Continued

If you want to read the first part, go here. (That was the first draft, it's changed a little since then)

And now, an exerpt from the next chapter, again, just a draft.

I moved into a cramped apartment on the west side, and settled into the pace of city living. I took long walks, absorbing the activity. I immersed myself in the early morning bustle, the sounds of sirens and people calling for taxis, the smells of hotdog vendors and exhaust fumes, the bright neon lights flashing
at night. I took my camera with me everywhere, and I experienced life through my lense. I was the woman with her red-headed baby bouncing on her shoulders in the park. I was the seventy year old man jogging around the lake with his dog. I was the homeless guy in an army jacket with his cardboard sign that said, "Waking up from the nightmare, please help". I was everybody, every day.

I then spent hours in my darkroom, developing the moments I'd captured on film. I wasn't interested in making friends, and I went largely unnoticed by anyone except the boy who delivered Chinese food. And yet, I was happy for the first time in my life. I was filling a space in this world with my photography. I was part of the mechanism, a silent, but active participant in the perpetual grind. I began freelancing for papers and magazines, and found enough work to pay my rent and upgrade my equiptment occasionally.

I regularly took assignments that sent me out of town, and it was one of these occasions that turned my world upside down.

To my utter shock, I had found the orchard.

Posted by Shannon at April 7, 2004 12:21 PM | TrackBack
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If, as I often do, I was browsing through every single book on the shelf in the grocery store... or drugstore... or department store...

If I picked up a book.. and read what you have written here... that book would go home with me... bought and paid for... packed into my little plastic sack... and I'd read a bit at every traffic light I had to stop at... til I could get home... settle in... and not move til the wee hours of the night...

Now... that's a grabber...

You did good...

Posted by: Aunt Vickie at April 7, 2004 12:55 PM

ooooohhhhhh, tell me more!

Posted by: Ashley at April 7, 2004 01:12 PM

yes writing like this special not something you can just find everyday .. i would have to totally agree this is a collection i would buy.

You are a excellent writer you words you can smell taste touch and hold ..

Posted by: matt_31 at April 8, 2004 01:59 AM
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