i love you madly
in the starbucks
cause the star luck's
what i'll have, see
i see friends
shakin hands
say'n how do you do
a little unfeigned
and partially true
the medleys they blare
as i stare at my book
hooked on lewis hums louie
what a billet they share
two-shots of dark harmony
the tandem of alchemy
constellations of pain
mixed with beauty and
skies of blue rain
they're really sayin
love me too
and no one will look
at my two shaking hands
or brush his cuffs through
all the whipped cream en route
to brush tears or to care
but these mornings are music
singing how do you do
to the providenced
ears since the ironic moon
and the stars still commune
on their red carpet plans
these mornings love madly
the metaphored jazz
the sound of a cupful
and i think to myself
what a rim-ring of moments
what a turn of events
what a wonderful world when
joy can't choose the blend
they're better concoctions
than i ever brew:
these mornings con panna
though they cut me in two
Very nice.
Posted by: LLB at May 14, 2004 06:53 PMmetaphored jazz is spot on.
the words neither diffident nor ostentatious.
the words reach the stillness.
tastefully done.
Posted by: furp at May 14, 2004 07:44 PMLovely, sad and so honest. Makes me happy to read and I am also headed for Starbucks though my husband gives me the "you addict" grin.
Posted by: Gypsy at May 16, 2004 05:19 PMsomehow I missed this. may must have been awful.
i do feel slightly unfeigned and partially true.
Posted by: jeep at August 19, 2004 06:00 PMWELL... I duno if you should be talking to me so casually.. I mean it's on-line for everyone to SEE and I don't even know you JOY. I mean we haven't even shaken hands in starbucks or anywhere else for that matter.
dark and rich are not for me
though life would seem easy
for simplicity and truth are plane to see
and all the more beauty
gracious, how sweet you send the cast and draw theonlines in line, netting the school you are. ("theonlines" is my mythical god of skipped space and everything absent. [a compliment, in case the stars shift])
Posted by: nancyril at April 25, 2008 12:09 AM